Young gun

This one is a complete 10 on 10. Whenever someone passes away its is always the little kid who is still confused by what has just happened because he is ...

I don't think there is much to correct as the story is pretty much perfect. I liked the word games and the mind games being played by the two.Its quite ...

I hope you do not mind if I beg to defer. It was mainly the first stanza which generated interest. The speaker goes on and on about the topic which ...

So...a take on how we try to imagine the worse when it does not even happen.Thats nice. Frankly,it is true that we find a simple mistake might make people angry ...

Despite this being "true" poem about people who do not fit in,you may have oversimplified the presentation. to avoid the conformist stream, always staying unique. Even though her convictions lead ...

I think we all know what the theme is about. About the poem now: The women are marching seven by seven Wondering if they're walking to heaven This does not ...

Towards the end I felt confused and strangely inspired. Though you want to keep that theme of "mystery" to some lines you should not overuse it.The poem must flow in ...

When it comes to a piece like this I really don't know whereto start. The general feel of this was two buddies hanging out together,figuring what they might grow up ...

The title was quite catchy and the poem was worth reading. The theme of leaving someone to be free brings about thoughts such as growing up and going separate tells ...

Before coming to the last lines I thought this would be about cursing the weak and pathetic human motions and showing hatred towards them.The reason being that all the emotions ...

This is an excellent example of writing tragedy. The man's advice to the world before he dies gave something to think about.The advice on how we could not end up ...

This was quite good to read. The choice of writing such a simple but serious topic was really nice.Anyone who would have been through the same as your main character ...

This was very unconventional,special,and very unique. Not many people think about writing what you just wrote.The theme was a very nice one to select “ No, I don’t. When I ...

The main confusion may be the speaker's behaviour which might or might not be good for the poem. Possibilities for the speaker's behaviour point out to common reasons such as ...

This story was one like out of the movie scenes. Interesting,gripping and the classical dramatic end.A well chosen concept with some brilliant storytelling. Just before your story, tell the readers ...